Testimonials

"Excellent notes, man!!!  Super powerful.  You do not disappoint!"
--Andrew Saxsma

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“Your notes are FANTASTIC!”

--Brandi Nicole

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"WOW! Thanks very much for all your great suggestions and specific feedback. I was hoping for the level of detail you provided, and was not disappointed!" 

-- Don Welch

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"Thank you so much Doug. Your notes are AWESOME. I appreciate your thoroughness and care for each pilot.  You gave me lots to think about and incorporate.  I will be back!  And I will send friends!"
--Felicia Pride

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"Man! I heard you were good, Doug, but I think that's a massive understatement. Your notes are amazing!"
--Bashir Gavriel

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"These notes are incredible! Can't thank you enough for your thoughtful, insightful, detailed feedback; it's invaluable."
--Tim Hotchner

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"You've provided some amazing development notes.  The best I've ever received.”
--Russell Koos

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“Your notes are AWESOME.”

--Elaine Loh

Dynasty / Story Editor

Gossip Girl / Staff Writer

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“Wow.  This is such great feedback, Doug.”
--Raqiyah Mays

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"Your notes were absolutely fantastic and so on point."

--Monique Peek

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"Wow.  Great coverage."
--Joe Castel

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"Really great notes."
--Billy Paul

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"I really can't get over how great these notes are!!   Honestly I think you have probably covered everything anyone could possibly think of!"

--Aarthi Ramanathan

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"Thank you for your incredible and valuable feedback.   I really feel like your feedback is the best I have ever gotten."

--Ann Calamia

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"Once again you have given me fantastic notes!   I'm recommending you to everyone I know!"
--Monet Ravenell

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"These notes are awesome!"
--Andy Kozel

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"Thank you so much!  These notes are so clear and great."
--Nalini Sharma

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"This feedback is fantastic."
--Nickey Woods

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"Your notes are outstanding."
--T. Almog

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"These are great notes Doug!!"
--Kelly Stanphill

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"Wow, you really did an excellent job on the notes!"
--Susan Siravo

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"I am in love with your notes!! Thank you so much for the amazing feedback and for pointing me in the right direction! Your notes were extremely detailed and helpful, and I will definitely be working with you again on future projects!!"
--Cylla Senii

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"Doug has really helped to solidify clear paths to addressing the dangling issues causing hiccups in my feature script. His feedback was layered, intelligent, thoughtful, and extremely helpful at this stage of my writing process.  Thank you!"
--Talibah Newman

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"I highly recommend Doug as a script consultant.  His thoughtful and constructive feedback has helped me go from an amateur to a professional screenwriter.  You want someone like Doug on your side.  He's a writer who has been on the receiving end of feedback.  Anybody can critique your work but only someone who cares can help you make it better."

--Tony Boland

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"Doug's coverage was invaluable in helping my script make it to the 2012 Nicholl Finals."
--Rob Carter

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"As an author, it's often difficult to see your script objectively.  Doug has an uncanny ability to not only get to the heart of a script, but to offer a truly useful roadmap for future revisions.  I can highly recommend his talents to any screenwriter."
--Ross Mahler

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"Doug is everything you want in a reader: thorough, insightful, knowledgeable and kind.  I trust his input completely, and I turn to him as often as I can.  He can help you turn a troubled script around, or make a good script great.  I recommend him without hesitation or reservation!
--Kathryn Maughan

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"I've used Doug's service a number of times and find him to be insightful, professional, and prompt.  He gives a mix of "big picture notes" as well as detailed page notes both of which assist in creating a game plan for rewrites. With his insightful guidance  I've elevated the quality of my work and, as a direct result, recently optioned two scripts." 

--Stephen Hoover

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“Recently consulting with me on a troublesome script, Doug was thorough, insightful, kind and patient.  Constructive critique is his strong suit, and his perspective can be a game changer.  I heartily recommend Doug as a writer and as the consultant to whom a person who ‘wrote the book’ could turn when she needed an informed opinion.”

--Wendy Jane Henson

Author, SCREENWRITING: STEP BY STEP

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"Thank you so much for your thoughtful analysis of my script.  You really got all my subtext!  Thanks for kindly pointing out the points of my story that need building up.  The next re-write will be so much easier with your notes as a guide.  Thanks again!  Money well spent!  PS: thanks for the wicked fast turn around time!  When on a deadline, that is worth more than gold."
--Leah Waller

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 "Wow, Doug, I’ve received probably 5 coverage notes on this project and yours by far is the most insightful and thought provoking for me. You brought up excellent points."

--Alex Ardenti

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"Thanks very much for the notes, they were exactly what I was looking for."

--Matt Canham

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“This is exactly what I was hoping to get.”
--Joe Henriques